Haiku - Spring

I saw a robin jumping around in my front garden. I caught it on top of a trellis singing! A Haiku flashed in my head! Here it is:

Robin's singing
Spring is in the air
Peace in mind

And then, I thought of my classmate who writes Haikus beautifully! When she sent out a monthly newsletter about our study group's class lesson with Hata Sensei.
I asked her to modify my Haiku.  Here is her version:


Outside robin's song
Spring's melody floats in air
Inspires peace in mind


HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY!